JeffreyHB123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[the Composer]

Sheet music?

Very nice song. Any chance I can score some sheet music for it? PM me or reply to this. Thanks much. :D

[-Morning Rush-]

Happy. ^^

A bit repetitive and only chords similar to your other songs. Still like this though and cannot help but say that there is definitely a stream of happiness embedded in this song. Also, fades to nothing after 1:53 and then is nothing till the end of the song. Writer's block? Lulz, good job.

LOST-R34LITY responds:

Thanks. And yah we know its has an extra silence at the end. We probably just had the volume control go on past the song.

[-Illusion-]

Well done!

Wish there was more! Just faded away. =( Really liked this song.

<3 T3H C0wB311!!!!!!!!!

[-Above Clouds-]

Nice, almost

A VERY beautiful exposition using rolling chords. Sounded extremely good until that bass beat. =/ Whenever there is a bass beat it takes the whole sound and destroys it distorting the sound of the following beats. Maybe its just my sound system (headset) but changing the bass beat would be nice. Very good otherwise.

[-No Handlebars Remix- {WIP}]

Wow

The only credit I give you for this song is the fact that you have the audacity to make a submission like this. (Basically, te tiene cajones) Simply making a repeating drum beat to a song that you merely turned the volume down on hoping people would not hear the song's background music does not constitute a good, or even worth hearing, submission. Maybe it would not be as noticeable if you did something like continuing the drum beat till the end of the song rather than letting it cut out to playing the regular song quietly.

0/5 1/10

LOST-R34LITY responds:

well yah its not done i forgot to mention its still a WIP song. But whatever. And youtube disagrees with you so yah. Cause its on there with almost no bad comments what so ever. But regardless i understand what you are saying.

Oh and also we didnt turn down the volume we just couldnt find an acapella for the song, so we used virtual DJ to take out the music, even though it didnt work too well. ALSO, the drum beat isnt reapeating continuously (even if it was, it's better than using a drum loop.) And the drums aren't the only thing changed. This is also our first song so yeah you shouldnt expect much.

[-TD- Homebase (Trance RMX)]

Awesome!

I am so glad to be you're first review! I just this evening listened to some of your other songs. They, along with this one, are very well thought out! You truly have skill as a trance composer. Keep up the good work and songs. ^.~

[Colony of Tires]

Nice.

Well done with the synchronized bass and melody! Sounds really sweet. Maybe a different or more complex melodic instrumentation would help your next submission. ^^

[-TD- Concupsience]

Erm...

This is a good trance song. It has its moment and repeating measures giving it a groove that people can move to without doing any tricks. The only thing that I really object to in this submission is the broken/out of tune guitar playing on the one-e---a of every other beat to the song. It may be my sound system but I doubt it. If you make another song it would be nice to not hear one, not too pleasant sound, throughout the entire thing. And hey, don't let my review make you think you're bad! Keep working at your artistry. Eventually you'll create an epic musical concoction which I would be more than happy, and look forward to, hearing.

Triented responds:

I will add an extra ingredient to the concoction, CHEMICAL X! (X is being referred to as the raver's drug, also a slapstick pun referring to the powerpuff girls.)

Thanks for the review, I did make that bass detune for every time it was played, I was attempting a pitchbass (fail) but I still enjoyed making the song with it.
Thanks again for the review. :]

[The Uplifting]

Continue

This could definitely use some lengthening. Its good. Also, you may want to change up the melody. It gets repetitive in this short version so if you did a longer one it would be even more so. Still a pretty good song. ^^

Champius responds:

yeah the melody is really annoying after a while.....if i were to lengthen it i would definately not have the same melody loop three times over....thanks for the review