Erm...
This is a good trance song. It has its moment and repeating measures giving it a groove that people can move to without doing any tricks. The only thing that I really object to in this submission is the broken/out of tune guitar playing on the one-e---a of every other beat to the song. It may be my sound system but I doubt it. If you make another song it would be nice to not hear one, not too pleasant sound, throughout the entire thing. And hey, don't let my review make you think you're bad! Keep working at your artistry. Eventually you'll create an epic musical concoction which I would be more than happy, and look forward to, hearing.